6/9/2008

The following is a simple writing. Each piece was written in under 10 minutes with no preparation or familiarity with the statements that were to be provided.

 

We got up at 8, and the whole house was a bustle, Boxes and bags lined the walls outside doors like so much trash, but colored with a starburst’s palette, bright greens and reds and yellows, always framed or speckled with white.

Smells of bread and cold meat mingled with salt and sunblock. The steady procession of men proceeded to the van, laid down with straps and stacks. While Women scurried about, checking every door, every window, and themselves in every mirror.

As the car filled, and few were left in the house, they checked and rechecked, until one had seen it all, and then we were off. Not like a shot, but like a turtle, who thought he was a hare. The engine roared but the van, more full than it would have, rocked and leaned as much as it rolled forward, until there was enough speed to hold it all down.

Once the car slowed to a halt, the doors cautiously slid open, but the people were anything but. They scrambled out in a scene too common in sinking ships and burning buildings, but they were not fleeing from but fleeing to.

Loose stones and sharp grass gave way to rough pavement, well heated in the noon day sun. Splintering old dock boards provided a little respite, but demanded their own payment.

And just as the crashing waves were in sight, one last obstacle, the bubbling sand, creeping into and over wherever it could.

 

Once again as you tried to fly over the sand, you were pulled deep into those fiery depths by the many yokes across your shoulders and around your neck. Many trails glitter with the precious things whose value dwindled before heat or cold, but no sooner does a gust of sand fly, hauntingly reminiscent of foamy sea spray, then a screeching voice raises the alarm, and your fingers wrap around a steel handle, and feel how hot it has become.

But then the site is reached, chairs and shade set, and you are free.

Running down the sand so fast you struggle to keep your feet from falling behind. Sheets of ragged water kick up like flaps of a torn tent as you crash through, tripping as the water reaches up above your knees.

But you didn’t trip, you dove. You can move much faster now, with your hands and your feet.

Soon enough you clamber back up to shore, expelled from the sea like a marooned sailor, but how many laughed at their good fortune, it’s time for lunch.

With the cold of the sea running down your skin, the sand doesn’t feel so bad, every step cooling in your touch.

Down the planks, across the street, to grandmother’s house we go. What does it matter that she’s not yours, she’s a grandmother, with all the simple sweetness and wrinkled grins that bind the very old, and the very young.

Hot dogs steaming inside their brightly shining aluminum, a can of Sunkist sweating at the thought of facing the sun, and twin disks of thick dark bread, standing guard like two castles reaching above and below to protect the soft skin of their alabaster maidens.

The register rings as cards pop up to display their price, powered not by electricity but by her fingers.

Of course you would like to devour your goodies right on the doorstep, but you can’t. No words are needed to make you wait. Your arms cradle many wax paper bundles, while both hands try to contain those that rest on top, rolling like square wheels.

Hands reach out to snatch their own, and only your quick moves keep what’s yours from vanishing with the rest.

And so, at last, you eat. The crunch of a few bites confirms that sand kicked up by a heavy footstep has in fact found its way into your food, but once you stop worrying, you realize that it actually tastes better.

Books come out, and straw hats become night caps, but that’s not for you.

Waters have receded, and a thousand shallow pools dot the dark plains.

Soon castles emerge beside lakes and moats, while crabs wander, knights without a king.

It’s time for a walk you say. Someone among the group puts down their book or mumbles out of their sleep, and you’re off.

The damp sand has become a fair, filled with jugglers, paddlers, architects, and sculptures. As time passes many prepare for the ocean’s onslaught, some with high walls, others with deep holes, but we keep walking. Better to go back when it’s all gone, than to see it slowly eaten away.

Soon the gentle sheets curl into each other, and crash within inches of their border. No one makes it far, and most either ride above, or tumble within, thrown back to shore like some vile bite that could not be swallowed.

(To be continued…)

 

 
Make a Free Website with Yola.